The Last of Them Ch. 02

Excellent bit of writing. My only worry is that you won't continue the saga.

I can foresee the aliens being a threat to earth and our good hero using the ET technology to make huge advances on earth as well as prep things for the coming war. You also need to explain/show how she's going to make him happy. While the sex is nice, I get a feeling there is far more to her than just a hot body.

If there's anything I would suggest, it would be to make the chapters longer so the story isn't mostly about the various ways they have sex. I'll certainly look forward to the next chapter. Hurry up!

12mil lyrs damn she is older then the dinosaurs.and she is bringing her drama to earth skanky bitch.just cause she is hot doesnt mean we need more aliens here in the states.i guess we will just have to wait and see if it goes to shit.

Just Found

Your story and really like it. Now that he has the Info on her and her Planet. He will have to try and Develop something to help Destroy the extraxis . Sorry if I spelled that wrong.

usefull things

Now she can pick his brain on warlike feelings. Don't forget the paradox of light verses time. It may take light 186000 miles per sec but that is not a limit for an advanced race.

More please!

Just found this. Hope to read more soon.