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Chapter 01: Poor Little Naive Girl

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/29/15

Your future

Don't give up your day job!

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by Jedd1101/29/15

Future

Yeah, in fact, you might want to pick up some extra shifts with the night crew, because you're going nowhere writing.

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by Anonymous01/29/15

Bleh. No stars for this. F cup breasts? Do you high school boys know how ridiculous they look? Of course, if all you do is watch porn, then I guess F cups are the norm.

Quit writing. You suck.

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by Anonymous01/30/15

Excellent.

I thought it was great! it is obviously ridiculous, yet easy to imagine. Looking forward to seeing more, so dont stop!

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by EsotericNiceGuy01/31/15

quite an amazing parody

I liked it. Haters gonna hate. People taking online sex stories waaaaay too seriously.

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