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by CowSayMoo01/19/15

Great sequel

I'm loving this series!
If I had to make a constructive comment I would say that I feel like she was able to break him just a little too easily. It seemed like he went from defiant macho guy to mindless slave really quickly. But it is your story so you probably have a better idea of where it is headed than I do.
Maybe I'm just being greedy, since I hope to read several more stories about the Queen just completely dominating this poor guy.
Thanks for writing!

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