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Congrats !1
Very easy to read story. Writer has talents.
Sam
perhaps
Great short story. Perhaps factual but in any case great writing. I liked it very much, thank you.
Style and clarity....
I loved this writer's effort. She (or maybe "he") has a great style and flow. I had a similar BG, growing up in the Bronx but I was lucky enough to get busted at 16 and sent away where a Corrections Officer pushed me into writing and hammered at me until I discovered I actually liked it. Congratulations! Keep up the good work! I'll search for your work.
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