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by greenmountaineer01/05/15

Nicely done. On the surface reminiscent of the dinosaurs's sudden extinction, but it strikes a deeper cord: going to the office on 9/11, or your 17 year old daughter's out in the family car late at night during a blizzard, or ......

how tenuous existence is.

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