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Sad to see it's over.
Enjoyed every chapter and have waited for every chapter. Sad to see it end, but hoping for more still.
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Epic.
Awesome storying! The story kept me wanting more and more with the character development. I enjoyed how you worked the power up from beginning to end. Keep up the character evolving and thanks again for the fantastic read!
Damn such a nice story it's a pity it's come to an end :(. I must say you wrote it well and I thoroughly enjoyed reading this series.
Damn such a nice story it's a pity it's come to an end :(. I must say you wrote it well and I thoroughly enjoyed reading this series.
NOOO!!!
Well.. Thank you for the good writing, i loved every chapter and every character you made. I hope you write again... Not too long i hope.
Thanks Nat
Awesome
I really liked the fact that the Main character went through some changes throughout the stories. And I loved the whole story in general. I did love the scene with Ms. Adanna the best. Something about him spanking his teacher. I also like that he doesn't treat the women like whores and that there is actual friendship between the characters. Hope the next part or a different series comes soon.
Perfect
Loved the story completely and thoroughly. I can't say i like any one chapter specifically it love it all as a whole. Its very refreshing to have a story written this way. I'm sure you'll do great whatever way you take the story from here or wish to write it
Great! To Be Continued?
I started reading a few months back and caught up to ch. 16. Not being able to read more was killing me! I forgot about it and one day remembered it and saw that it was finished. I just read the last chapter and the whole story was great! I find it so hard to find someone that writes stories realistic enough to read. Can't wait to continue reading more of your works!
I got up to ch. 14 not 16.
Shades of Spiderman!
Dear Mr. AnthonyFiction,
I have to admit you have a very prodigeous writing talent, and you kept me enthralled for almost a full year waiting for the end of your story, but it was well worth it, at least in my humble opinion. One thing I realized after I finished: this story had so much of the Spider Man myth embedded in it, I kept waiting for J. Jonah Jameson to call out, "'I want more pictures of that webbed menace, Parker!!!" Otherwise, a great story, despite its' length! 5***** for a final grade, Mr. Fiction!
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