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Another 5 stars
You naughty girl, this must be a good friend to get this sort of story. Waiting for more from you. Thank you
Rawmaster50
Truly impressive
It's truly impressive what you capture in a single page. Makes me wonder what you can do if you make your stories longer.
One thing try proof reading so you catch obvious things such as "...allowed my song to defile me haunted me for the entire evening, the next day, and the following week." I think you meant son not song.
Take it slowly!
Short and sweet! I think it would have been better if you'd built background up more before "the deed was done". Also, in incestuous situations I would expect the son to be less "aggressive" & more in awe of achieving his heart's desire - impregnating his Mom! Looking forward 2 more in future from you. Make stories longer! Keep us on tenterhooks - "Will she, won't she?"!
thank you for the support
These stories are written for someone. This someone, who is very special to me, has the fantasy where the son is the aggressor not in awe. So that is why that piece is different in this work. Thank you again. Keep reading :-)
Fantastic
I for one love how aggressive the son is with his own mother. He just takes her while she holds on and shamefully enjoys the ride. Hope you write more.
Very well written
This was very well written. Had you reread this before submitting it you would have caught the errors, otherwise it was fantastic.
Mommy is the wromg word. Makes you sound like a nine year old.
Give her a name.
Wish I knew what order to read these in
Like the Story line so far but I think I read part 3 first then part 2 and now I'm wondering if there is a part 4 yet. I like that she's submitting to her son. I like that she's aware that she's becoming his. I didn't need the praying but I'm sure some like that. The mother is fine, its the son I don't like. I like everything he does to his mother but I don't have any sense of why. Perhaps I should read part 1 before commenting but when did he recognize his mother was a sub? What pushed him to break the taboo? How did he got so good at it? Knowing these things would probably help me enjoy them more.
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