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i very much agree with gordo
Not a bad idea. To really work though, it needs to be fleshed out. More lead up to it. Realistic conversations, feelings. What's exciting about it and what is worrisome. Keep reading on here and keep trying. That's the only way to get better.
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Writing isn't your thing find another hobby! 1*
agree
i very much agree with gordo
nice try
Not a bad idea. To really work though, it needs to be fleshed out. More lead up to it. Realistic conversations, feelings. What's exciting about it and what is worrisome.
Keep reading on here and keep trying. That's the only way to get better.
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