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by Anonymous

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by gordo1202/02/15

Very Very Poor English Skills

Writing isn't your thing find another hobby! 1*

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by Anonymous02/03/15

agree

i very much agree with gordo

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by PolyLvr02/03/15

nice try

Not a bad idea. To really work though, it needs to be fleshed out. More lead up to it. Realistic conversations, feelings. What's exciting about it and what is worrisome.
Keep reading on here and keep trying. That's the only way to get better.

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