I'm My Sister's Husband's Wife

Good. Want to read more chapters of this.

Not only is your writing below a reasonable standard...

But you also do not understand the relationship between gender and sexuality, which is actually quite offensive.

want more

want more

@ offended

No where did the author claim anything about distinguishing between gender and sexuality. If this story was offensive by this "standard" then the majority of the stories on this site would be offensive to you and therefore I'd recommend you no longer visit.

Good First Effort

Liked your story very much. Keep up the good work.

great start

This story was a great start to what hopefully will be a few chapters of Simon's sexual adventures with Paul and also with his twin sister. It turned me on so much to read about Simon dressing as a bride, sucking Paul's cock and then getting fucked. Now, he needs a female name and then maybe his twin sister can join them and make it a three-some. I can't wait !!!!

wrong on so many levels

sure I will stand in for you, for enough money.
I can't attend my own wedding, so I want you to go instead.
I know you are the brother, not my fiancé, but we are going on our honeymoon anyway.
I can't believe the loving couple could even think of doing this. or good old mom. (didn't want to lose her deposits?)
too silly to be taken seriously.
but maybe that is the point?

Not Sure That Its Offensive In Nature...

...At least, I don't believe its meant to be. Its a basis for most TV fantasies involving the wedding day. Yes, it is wrong on so many levels, and taking it all the way into the honeymoon was stretching it past the breaking point of believability. Nevertheless, it would have possibly been more believable with some well crafted character backgrounds. A better depth to the brother's need to crossdress, the sister and mother's incredible desire to 'see the wedding through no matter what', and finally what's up with the fiancee's sudden desire to have anal sex with another man. Since the twin brother had no desire anywhere in his background to be female (gender dysphoria) there's no way for the fiancee to be seen as anything but male. So the 'chain' of who's attempting to be what breaks in a number of places. I hope the author takes this for a well intentioned critique as much as I take the story for a well intentioned wedding day crossdressing fantasy. Cheers! --- Josie

I liked your story. I thought it was really good!!! And personally if you do write another chapter for Paul and Simon I would not involve his sister Sara in any sex between Paul and Simon.

Kind of dumb. Guess boy's ass smells better than his sister's pussy.

Innovative and original

I liked this story a lot! I can't remember reading this particular concept before, and it was lots of fun as well as being original and creative. A great way to cut loose with a fantasy that one will probably never actually do. Don't listen to the naysayers, it was well written and the suspension of disbelief was just right. I hope you write more!

Ignore the haters

Don't let the haters get you down. It was an excellent story, I loved reading it. If you want to write another chapter, that would be totally cool. :-*

Sexy . . . want more

Ignore them -- I don't come here for morality lessons. I come here to get turned on and I did. Keep it coming.

Simon/Sara to become a real girl

maybe Simon/Sara should get implants and begin hormone treatment so she can become the real bride she seems to want.

very good

Very good concept and writing.. more please.. love to be that bride.. seems like his sister ma have to work harder to keep her guy.. maybe many threesomes

Back the fuck off

To all the haters out there this is a fuckng porn site if you don't want to get offended don't fucking read the story. The story clearly indicates transsexual and croassdressers for all you dick heads who can't read. Mature the fuck up