All Comments on 'Learning the Ropes'

this was way to short it needs a total rewrite. you give no real background on them, no character development and no plot. this should be chapter two of three or four not a stand alone and it should be three times longer to get to the same place.

What more can I say..sorry ⭐️⭐️

Nice read, but it seems a little rushed to me. No character development or world building. Just wham bam, thank you ma'am. Dont get me wrong, I'm not dumping on your story. You have lots of potential and I hope you continue to add on to this story. However, just skiw it down a little. Part of the fun to the climax is the work from the start.