just cannie cope with the W/we nonsense. Pretentious crap.
Like Scotsman69 I found the stuttering U/us difficult to get along with. Apart from that, well done.
Stopped reading at the first "W/we",very distracting from the plot of the story.
I had forgotten how warmly embracing and open minded some (only some) readers of the site can be. For those struggling to read the W/we and U/us I have decided to edit the story. Perhaps now it will be better?
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Sorry,
just cannie cope with the W/we nonsense. Pretentious crap.
Pretty good -- thank you
Like Scotsman69 I found the stuttering U/us difficult to get along with. Apart from that, well done.
Agree with previous
Stopped reading at the first "W/we",very distracting from the plot of the story.
There, there...
I had forgotten how warmly embracing and open minded some (only some) readers of the site can be.
For those struggling to read the W/we and U/us I have decided to edit the story. Perhaps now it will be better?
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Back to The List or
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