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by Scotsman6902/17/15

Sorry,

just cannie cope with the W/we nonsense. Pretentious crap.

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by Anonymous02/17/15

Pretty good -- thank you

Like Scotsman69 I found the stuttering U/us difficult to get along with. Apart from that, well done.

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by Anonymous02/17/15

Agree with previous

Stopped reading at the first "W/we",very distracting from the plot of the story.

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by misty_girl02/20/15

There, there...

I had forgotten how warmly embracing and open minded some (only some) readers of the site can be.
For those struggling to read the W/we and U/us I have decided to edit the story. Perhaps now it will be better?

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