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WTF
Was that !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Total Rubbish
To bad to bother with
Good story.
Ignore the anonymous pricks lol.
.....the fuck?????
Jeez, this is a dumb story, do us a favor and dump your computer in the shithouse so you're not tempted to use it anymore.
What makes up a story?
During the past year you've turned out story after story. Most just one Lit page long. No background, no storyline, no proper endings, much criticised which you totally ignore, mainly "conversations", not even with decent titles ... the something, the something else, the something very similar. TAKE A FEW DAYS, read the Lit forums. To my mind you're just the Literotica version of a troll.
Notice to Anonymous douchebags...........
Bunch of lame ass wankers always criticizing a story.
This was a funny story and many people enjoyed it.
To you losers with the asinine critique, go fuck a cactus!
Thanks
Thanks so much, Fantasy Train:
I enjoy the comments by Anonymous, however. They reaffirm my belief in free speech. No matter how idiotic they are--Why do you keep reading my stories, for instance, if you dislike them so much?--mental midgets should have the right to spew their hatred, and illogic. As for Anonymity, it's the last retreat of the coward.
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