you saying you saw shades of Blanche DuBois and Stanley Kowalski in here, lavatrain? If you are, I'll take it as a compliment, maybe the best compliment I've ever gotten.
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Anonymous01/07/15
elucidate please.
Started with such promise and then ended. A picture of the situation building very nicely and then..........it happened and that was it.
English
well. that happened.
Care to elaborate? Was a good read, so far as it went. I was expecting a character named Blanche to insinuate herself.
a character named Blanche, huh
you saying you saw shades of Blanche DuBois and Stanley Kowalski in here, lavatrain? If you are, I'll take it as a compliment, maybe the best compliment I've ever gotten.
elucidate please.
Started with such promise and then ended. A picture of the situation building very nicely and then..........it happened and that was it.
battering ram
love your story - love how it ended.
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