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by Anonymous01/06/15

Great story!!

I like where this is going so far especially the humor of the animals whom I'm guessing can change into sexy men haha! ;) Please post another chapter soon!! :) For a first time story you did a good job!!

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by Anonymous01/06/15

Good so far more please

Love it so far need a little more build in main character. Look for
More soon

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by tabbymidnite01/06/15

wonderful for a first story

I do hope you have ore at the ready. Cannot wait to read more good plot. Will keep my eyes watching for more....

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by Anonymous01/07/15

More please! This was a rather promising start!

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by Izzzzy01/07/15

Can't wait for more!!

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by Anonymous01/09/15

Love it

Please complete this story, I am very interested in finding out more about those animals and what young Freya is in for at such a beautiful location.

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by Anonymous01/12/15

Looking forward to the continuation of this story

I am intrigued by Freya - she seems bright and inquisitive, and while labeling herself as antisocial, clearly has a very good "friend" in Felix. Looking forward to finding out who the "deep, soothing voice" is, and how he knows her name - assuming he's right? Or has he mistaken her for someone else? Otherwise, how would he know her name, considering she's solitary, by choice. This story can go in many different directions - curious what path the author will choose.

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by stripespuppy01/12/15

Interesting

I look forward to seeing more of Freya and Felix and the mystery characters.

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by Anonymous02/25/15

good start

Very well laid foundation for a series just watch the spelling errors

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