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Wanting Him

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/06/15

hooked already!

Please continue! Loving this story

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by FlamingHails01/06/15

Loving this story. Can't wait to read more!

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by MADISONKAI01/06/15

Good Read. 5*****

Looking forward to reading more. Please don't wait too long to post another chapter.

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by jackfrost62601/06/15

more pls

Really liked it can't wait to see what hapens next

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by cannd01/06/15

really good start

I like the pace for the beginning. It was kinda like..here is how we got here. And then it ended in a perfect place where you pulled up tight and you have this big confrontation....Though Ashton has some explaining to do as to why a drunken pass makes him drop his club and friends.
I loved how it really caught how so many freshmen feel...Hell, some of us felt it longer than freshman year. I really look forward to more.... I hope as you move forward into their relationship that you slow it down a tad

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by Anonymous01/07/15

Holy angst, Batman!

I'm in love with this story already.

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by Anonymous01/11/15

Can't wait

I can't wait to see how this stories goes

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by Anonymous01/15/15

please write more.

I am hooked! I will love to read more.

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