Sibling Revival-ry Ch. 03

Sorry you lost me when you involved the mum. Good story up till then.

Whew!

Keep 'em cumming! Having fun with this story! I'm betting there is a threesome in the future and mom's admonitions about not telling anyone will become a moot point.

Positive

Oh yeah, the comment is definitely positive. I would like to hear the details of how Natalie's 'punishment' got started as well. I'm sure Mom gave her the same instructions as well. Thus we have the different days. Afterwards, perhaps we can hear how everyone discovered everyone else. Good story.

Enjoy the story - keep it up

Keep the dad out of it. The three some should continue.

Great writing and pace

Terrific story and I agree keep the 3 some going between the kids and mom. They are all hot and the story is so awesome.

Ready for Round 4

This has been a really fun series so far. I do favor the sister still (personal kink bias) but the mother addition and how submissive she turned out to be is really great as well. Can't wait for Part 4!

Okay but not very hot

I really liked the first 2 chapters but the mother son and mother daughter sex just isn't appealing. I really liked the brother sister sex though. So if you could find a way to get the mother to stop it with her son and daughter I would really appreciate it.

I.....LIKED.....IT......A.....LOT!!!!!!!!

Well done...more please!

great story

looking forward to some exciting 3-way

Superb series!

Super story can't wait for ch.04,5,6..... Well done.

Great story!!!!

I love the story so far, but I'd like to see the brother and sister end up together. Call me a hopeless romantic, but would love to see them fall in love romantically.

Phew.

Read the first two, had to read this one tonight too. OMG first of all, the scene with the mother is the type of fleshed out sex scenes I commented about, so more of those even if that means less sex scenes overall. On that note too, the story seemed to get two birds with one stone for me, a more developed sex scene which led to less sex scenes which led to more character development. Some small gripes now, the sudden change in the mom's and his demeanor during sex was slightly offputting. Also, and this one's just personal taste, I don't like it when the female acts dominant at all or to submissive. With the better plot development and sex scenes I'd give this a 7 on my scale.

Fantastic

Don't listen to the comments about not including the mother.
That was epic 5 stars.

fantastic!

please keep this series going! i just love the way it is going and you write it very well. can't wait for the next chapter.

Adding the mom killed it for me. I don't mind if it makes since but here it doesn't. She already has a kinky D/s relationship with the dad but keeps the fact that she wants to be a sub a secret from him. Its just stupid you ruined a good story.

Really good story

Story is just great. People complaining about how you change "YOUR" story just makes no sense to me. If they don't like it read something else, better yet if they don't like it they should write their own. While at least some of what happens in all erotic stories may beg the term "artistic license" I find that this story seems to have a realistic flow. I appreciate you sharing "YOUR STORY" with us your readers. I had anticipated Rick "forcing" his submissive mother into a sexual situation with her daughter, I look forward to the next chapter and seeing how you develop your story. Again thank you for sharing your imagination with us your readers.

hot story

Fuck tests s blistering hot story. What about a chapter when all three get together? What does mum do outside the house?

Respect.

Dude/Duddette, honestly at the end of the 2nd one I didn't like the direction you were taking the story to, but the ending of this part made all the peices fall in nicely together. Keep up the good work.

This is awesome

I can't wait for chap 4

Just hurry up...

... With Ch 4 ! The anticipation is killing me .........

father?

So everybody is now fucking everybody else. The father had better get some from the daughter. If he gets left out- pretty shitty. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

cant wait for chapter 4 but leave the dad out and have an aunt or cousin or some other female relative join

Why not Dad?

Others say don't include the Dad. I would like to see the Dad catch them all and then fill his daughters cunt with his cock while watching his son fuck the Mother. What is wrong with that scenario? I think it is hot.

Request.

If you want or don't want to bring the father in, that's up to you Sire. But would you please consider adding some funny confusion between the current trio? Or you could use some emotions.... Well, just a request! I loved the way you wrote the 'fights' and 'retaliations' between the siblings, by the way.

Leave domination later

Nice story and well written. Not a dominant son with the 'please' crap and stripped himself off instead of slut mother. not for a nervous little fuck who was still grounded.

great story

please keep writting this story , please ! !

FF

Sorry Ive stopped reading, fed up with huge tits, ugly things!!!!!!!!

Well

I have really enjoyed reading the series so far and have thought that that the previous chapters were fantastic and tough to improve on. Well I was wrong! This in my opinion deserves far more than 5 stars!
Thanks for sharing!!
L

Thank you!

I love this series. It's a masterpiece of art. It's five stars in my book.

It takes two chapters

for brother and sister to do it, and in one chapter Mom turns into bi-sexual submissive incestuous slut. Its a fun family.

Great twist....

Hmmmmm..... wonder if a 3 some will rear it's head???? Keep going it's getting VERY interesting!!!!

@FF... You dont' know what you are missing....Had a girl friend with tits like that...GOD I LOVED TO WORK MY WAY AROUND THOSE... and the longer i worked the hotter she got!!!! :-)....

Moving.

Sibling shmibling,

Oh Yeah!

Loved the part about the "little voice" ending it all with "Mom's" punishment for him, quite an interesting read so far.

It is a good story, but like so many of them

they are all the same. The same in that the Mother has specifically said that needs to be treated like a slut. To be taken and basically owned by her son. But yet, as the dialogue continues all the son can do is stutter and can't form complete sentences. yes he loves his mom, and wants to respect her and I am thankful he feels that way. BUT she has said she needs to feel like a slut, like his slut, used for his AND her pleasure. Just just stop the whining, man up and take your mother like she wants to be taken.