Jenny

Sauve

Haut Medoc avec Fruit De Mer? Rosbif!

Cheating is cheating...

Cheating is cheating...so 1*...It doesn't matter if the cheater is the husband or the wife...

I thought they lived near each other, I'm a little confused

A few holes

Given that the Euro trades around $1.18 US that means you paid $24 us to fuck the front desk girl, $60 for a restaurant tip and $118 for a hotel room in europe. Talk about fantasies!

What a Bore

Can you imagine being bailed up at a party by this dreadful person?

wow you learn something

new everyday, today it was that pigs can write.

Lacking humanity

I think this story had the potential to be erotic and interesting, but you stumbled by omitting any semblance of humanity from each and every one of the characters.

The main character is a flawless physical specimen who has no difficulty seducing any and every woman he encounters. His personality comes across as cold, arrogant, and indifferent. He suffers no remorse or hesitation over his moral decisions, and simply lives for whatever brief physical pleasure he can find.

Jenny is equally soulless. She doesn't hesitate to leap into his bed, and immediately proclaims herself to be his whore, and demand that he fill her with his cum. When the two masseuses begin to violate her, she goes along for the ride, like a woman possessed.

Not one of these characters seems capable of controlling -- or even attempting to control -- their animal lust. If there were even a brief glimpse of humanity demonstrated by any of them, this story would have been far more interesting and realistic. As it stands, it's a script for a porno movie -- and not a particularly good porno movie.