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Nice foreplay!
We can't wait reading more about these two.
It was OK.
I wish there was more story.
It needs to be finished
Nice story but you need to finish it.
Appears
to be a huge chunk missing between being introduced and his cock disappearing down her throat. That's not erotic!
It is enjoyable
The build up transmits tension. But it does appear to be interesting fragment.
A delicious taste
What a tight, well-written scene. The fact that it leaves one wanting more is a testament to how well it is written. A sweet taste, sexy, what else does one need? Loved it. Such a talent.
A pleasant start to a story
But not a story - really. Maybe an opening paragraph. Maybe a vignette. But with so many, many issues and questions unresolved I find myself being upset that there wasn't more of it. And wishing I hadn't read it. I don't like unresolved. Sorry. Maybe next time.
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