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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/16/05

peek pique peak

ummmh ... it's "piqued her interest", not "peaked her interest", at least not in this in story, where he piqued her interest by peeking at her peaks.

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by EROTICFUN01/16/06

I wanted to know more....

I liked the story. The idea of sitting in the chair while a beautiful girl gets off a few feet away is a real turn-on.

I can imagine him watching her as she pleasured herself and at the same time was obviously teasing him. I would have felt frustration wanting to join in and not being able to do anything about it.

I only wish you would have told me more about how see felt when she got off. I wanted to know how it felt and what she was thinking at that moment.

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EROTICFUN

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