All Comments on 'A Day At The Beach'

by capricious_chic

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
peek pique peak

ummmh ... it's "piqued her interest", not "peaked her interest", at least not in this in story, where he piqued her interest by peeking at her peaks.

EROTICFUNEROTICFUNover 18 years ago
I wanted to know more....

I liked the story. The idea of sitting in the chair while a beautiful girl gets off a few feet away is a real turn-on.

I can imagine him watching her as she pleasured herself and at the same time was obviously teasing him. I would have felt frustration wanting to join in and not being able to do anything about it.

I only wish you would have told me more about how see felt when she got off. I wanted to know how it felt and what she was thinking at that moment.

signed

EROTICFUN

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