Loved this one. Pt 2 perhaps? X
A great story with a lovely finish. Please continue with more chapters.
I was wondering how this stranger was no nice to an obviously overhung guy. Last paragraph laid oit all out. Good wife. Two winners. Look forward to a continuation.
Thanks for sharing. I will be on watch for your future submissions.
That was super cute, hot, and romantic. You did such a wonderful job with your descriptions, I felt the warmth of the beach. Five stars.
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Your stories keep getting better
Loved this one. Pt 2 perhaps? X
A beautiful sting in the tail.
A great story with a lovely finish. Please continue with more chapters.
Good finish
I was wondering how this stranger was no nice to an obviously overhung guy. Last paragraph laid oit all out. Good wife. Two winners. Look forward to a continuation.
Fun Story****
Thanks for sharing. I will be on watch for your future submissions.
awwww
That was super cute, hot, and romantic. You did such a wonderful job with your descriptions, I felt the warmth of the beach. Five stars.
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Back to Who Wins? or
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