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by hplitprince01/09/15

Very sexy fantasy

The scenery is very well depicted and the descriptions of the characters are very specifically left out. This story left the perfect amount to my perverted imagination and gave me more than enough scenery to make the visualization wonderful.

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by Anonymous01/11/15

Engaging read

Somehow, after reading this story, it stuck with me longer than most other stories. At first, I wondered why, but I think I now know. When reading most stories, I feel as if I'm reading someone else's story, even if it's written from the first-person POV. But with this story, it somehow transcends that boundary and felt real, like I was there. Not everyone can write like that - so I look forward to enjoying more of your stories in the future!

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