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An Ending, a Beginning

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by Anonymous01/09/15

This is disgusting, the girlfriend is a real cunt for that bull shit and Sean is a scum bag for how he got the guy to his place and used him when the ad clearly said it was about the guy's pleasure. I would never let some faggot like Sean do that to me

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by Anonymous01/11/15

Rushed

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If you're such a homophobe, why read this? There's no need for such harsh language.

It was too rushed. He never asked why the man was on that address instead of the woman he had a meeting with. He submitted too quickly, there was no clear explanation of how he was able to put his needs aside immediately after meeting the man for two seconds. It looked like he had no self-respect for himself. The writing was good but you could do better in the next chapter.

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