- All
Comments (4) - Add a
Comment - Send
Feedback Send private anonymous feedback to the author (click here to post a public comment instead).
| Literotica Toy Store ADULT TOY & DVD STORE FAST & DISCREET |
Literotica XXX Webcams 24/7 LIVE CAMS - FREE PREVIEW W/AUDIO! |
Literotica Adult Movies STREAMING ADULT MOVIES PAY PER MINUTE |
English
Wow!
Unbelievable. Another straight guy writing wank-off denigrating lesbian sex fantasies. Jeez, dude, go troll the incest boards & spare us the misogyny drivel. I grok Je suis Charlie, but this isn't artistic expression, dude, it's just tasteless insensitive poorly written porn.
Erin
As sensual as a speeding ticket.
Pathetic. No heart. No soul. No anything
Gertrude Stein would say "Dumpington, there is no there, there!"
Excellent
Great stuff mate keep it up !
Excellent erotica
I'm enjoying the series immensely. Contrary to the views of some others, I think there is nothing wrong with 'porn'. Anyone who says they are reading stories on this site solely for the quality of the writing is, in my view, a little deranged.
Sure, I've read better, most of us have, I expect, but this author has nothing to be ashamed of. I think it is well written and, if it is without experience of lesbian loving relationships, then all the better. Most people reading this have, by definition of gender, never experienced it either. We are all guessing.
All I can say is that it fed my fantasies well. Much better than a lot of authors for whom English is a second language and do not know the difference between 'cloths' and 'clothes' or 'dominate' and 'dominant'. Ye gods!
No, far from being insulted, I think this author should be praised. Well done, and please write more. Some of us appreciate it!
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Bath Night Revisited Ch. 05 or
More submissions by Dumpington.