daddy/daughter stories I've read. I haven't read the writer's bio yet, but I suspect this is based on a real life experience. The girl's passion is undeniable.
the sex was nicely detailed, but I was just getting going...
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Anonymous01/10/15
Massage not message
How does one "message in slow sensual circles"? Despite that continuous error the story ended up being pretty good, but read over the story--don't just rely on spellcheck!
I am sorry about a few grammatical errors - notably message/massage. I did not proof read my work as I should have! I hope that further readers can overlook this error and enjoy the story as a whole!
Many young women have similar desires. It can be rewarding experience.
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Anonymous01/10/15
Extremely Hot!
Just keep writing.
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Anonymous01/11/15
Ridiculous dialogue!
Not exactly an original situation, every other father - daughter story here is much the same as this one. However, the dialogue in general is quite unrealistic; for example: "......you're so wet and responsive to Daddy's touch". As if anyone would ever say that and, no father refers to himself as "Daddy" when talking to his eighteen year old daughter. Both you and your character are juvenile but don't write stories that make a grown man juvenile too.
The guy's an idiot, I think you did great. My daughter called me Daddy, and at 33 she still does. And yes asshate, I've called myself daddy many many times, so get over it.
English
One of the best ...
daddy/daughter stories I've read. I haven't read the writer's bio yet, but I suspect this is based on a real life experience. The girl's passion is undeniable.
I just wish it was longer
the sex was nicely detailed, but I was just getting going...
Massage not message
How does one "message in slow sensual circles"? Despite that continuous error the story ended up being pretty good, but read over the story--don't just rely on spellcheck!
Poor proofing
I am sorry about a few grammatical errors - notably message/massage. I did not proof read my work as I should have! I hope that further readers can overlook this error and enjoy the story as a whole!
Great story.
But you deffinetly need an editor.
I would be happy to help on any future submissions. Feel free to contact me.
Hot Damn
I was so into the story that I missed the grammatical errors. Proofread all you want, but keep the storylines hot like this one. My pussy is so happy.
Fuck the errors
That was hot!!!!
*****
Interesting story
Many young women have similar desires. It can be rewarding experience.
Extremely Hot!
Just keep writing.
Ridiculous dialogue!
Not exactly an original situation, every other father - daughter story here is much the same as this one. However, the dialogue in general is quite unrealistic; for example: "......you're so wet and responsive to Daddy's touch". As if anyone would ever say that and, no father refers to himself as "Daddy" when talking to his eighteen year old daughter. Both you and your character are juvenile but don't write stories that make a grown man juvenile too.
Ignore Anonymous
Great story - keep writing :)
I agree! Ignore him
The guy's an idiot, I think you did great. My daughter called me Daddy, and at 33 she still does. And yes asshate, I've called myself daddy many many times, so get over it.
'Daddy'
My eldest daughter is in her early thirties and 'Daddy' is used quite often and we have never had a sexual relationship.
great story
Yes nice sexy story got my dick hard.
My mom also read it while I fucked her.
We have nudist group Mom is best
Wow
It was amazing...
Please continue..
Wonderful story
So well written! You took your time and had her only do what she required to fulfill her needs? Great job, write more!
great story
I wish my 30 year old daughter would let me to that to her.
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