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Ava's Fantasy

byLacey_St_Sin©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/11/15

Loved it!

I loved how you were able to develop the characters so well in such a short story! Loved Kane's personality, but also his vulnerability. Great first time story.

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by DrElectrogasm01/18/15

Very Real

You are very talented. You have a way of putting the reader right there in the moment. I truly enjoyed this story. Well done!!!

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by Anonymous02/03/15

Very nice

Very well written and with surprising depth for a short story.

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