Not a good ending, my note : C+
Really wanted them to fuck.
It's not over yet. I'm submitting part two soon.
Can't wait for part 2.
... and then a roller coaster drop of an ending. Finish a story, even a chapter, don't cut it off. Acup
Amazing! Please make a second part :D
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Not a good ending, my note : C+
Ending
Really wanted them to fuck.
Note from the writer:
It's not over yet. I'm submitting part two soon.
Can't wait for part 2.
Good build up...
... and then a roller coaster drop of an ending. Finish a story, even a chapter, don't cut it off.
Acup
Fantastic
Amazing! Please make a second part :D
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