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by Anonymous

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by albertson01/13/15

Writing teacher ?

Not a good ending, my note : C+

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by Anonymous01/15/15

Ending

Really wanted them to fuck.

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by Anonymous01/15/15

Note from the writer:

It's not over yet. I'm submitting part two soon.

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by Anonymous01/15/15

Can't wait for part 2.

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by Anonymous01/15/15

Good build up...

... and then a roller coaster drop of an ending. Finish a story, even a chapter, don't cut it off.

Acup

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by kissmecannibal01/20/15

Fantastic

Amazing! Please make a second part :D

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