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Oh MAN!
I am so glad I read this one! I just finished Breaking and Entering and this is exactly what it says - perspective. Now what the girl did in the first story makes so much more sense!
And by the way, this one got me pretty hot too --- except that her fear made me feel bad about it
Same author?
If these were actually written by the same person, I'm impressed. I read the first one and thought "Yeah, it's pretty hot, but the author has a lot to learn about women."
The second one is the one that got me off.
Thanks dude, you made this girl's night.
Perfection
Not the least bit turned on by the action, but the ending was glorious!
Editor
You should really find an editor... The story doesn't read very smooth (a lot of "Then...") and that has its impact on the turn-on.
Liked the storyline though... =)
Oh oh oh!! THIS! You made my day!
You have just completely made my day with this one. I was a little worried after the other one... okay, a lot worried. haha I was freaked out that I would be reading about her loving everything he did to her. But, oh man, that wasn't the case at all. Thank you. God, this was wonderful. Ah, sweet justice. Absolutely perfect. All of the things he thought about her, that she liked what he was doing... he truly was a completely clueless, idiotic bastard. And the very end? Just... it couldn't get any better than that.
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