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Bleeding Heart Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/11/15

That was fun! More would be great!

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by BARON135701/12/15

nice read

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by Anonymous01/12/15

Do you plan on finishing Hell's Gate?

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by Anonymous01/14/15

Autocorrect Gremlin…

appears to have attacked a few words on page 1.

Otherwise, an entertaining read.

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by Anonymous05/07/15

SO HOT

Can't wait to read the next chapters!

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