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pillow
To me, story kind of dragged in the beginning. It did pick up at the end. The way you put the ending had a totally differnt one that I would have expected. Good job.
I like your style.
I really do. Interesting, noncliche storyline and some cool characters to boot.
Looking forward to any of your future works. (More korrasami too, please?)
Different
I wouldn't call it sexy, cause it's kinda sad, but I liked how different it was. I feel sad for Nat.
fun
I really liked the way she moved on. Makes you feel kinda hopeful.
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