What exactly led you to believe that Ch. 6 was the end of this series? There was still the conflict caused by Jacob that led Shaun to accuse Michael of revealing his secret. How Jacob found out was not revealed in the last chapter nor a real break up between the two leading men. Thankfully, you were able to recover and bring closure to this romance with the antagonist losing for the last time and Michael asking Shaun to marry him. Matt talked some sense into Shaun about the ups and downs in relationships as was appropriate since Shaun has little experience with having a serious boyfriend. Michael showing up at Matt and Olive's place was great be because he was fighting for his man and the relationship he wanted with Shaun. --opinion coming from a writer in a graduate writing program.
I enjoyed so much reading this! It's a nice story, I loved the characters, specially Shaun and his two friends, as well Michael -of course...
I agree with its necessary another chapter (the wedding, for example) but anyway is good enough to me.
I'm a sucker for a happy ever after in stories and you have delivered it with this. Wonderful, loved it. Hope you decide to write more stories, you have a great talent.
So glad you finished! I really liked this story. Maybe write another? ;)
Finally
A much better ending :) loved it totally but i feel like i want an epilouge now oops hahahaha
Ummm
What exactly led you to believe that Ch. 6 was the end of this series? There was still the conflict caused by Jacob that led Shaun to accuse Michael of revealing his secret. How Jacob found out was not revealed in the last chapter nor a real break up between the two leading men. Thankfully, you were able to recover and bring closure to this romance with the antagonist losing for the last time and Michael asking Shaun to marry him. Matt talked some sense into Shaun about the ups and downs in relationships as was appropriate since Shaun has little experience with having a serious boyfriend. Michael showing up at Matt and Olive's place was great be because he was fighting for his man and the relationship he wanted with Shaun. --opinion coming from a writer in a graduate writing program.
Look forward to any future stories (:
thank you so much for this lovely story
I enjoyed so much reading this! It's a nice story, I loved the characters, specially Shaun and his two friends, as well Michael -of course...
I agree with its necessary another chapter (the wedding, for example) but anyway is good enough to me.
greetings from Chile.
Loved it
I'm a sucker for a happy ever after in stories and you have delivered it with this. Wonderful, loved it. Hope you decide to write more stories, you have a great talent.
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