What he really did? Was walked out of the house and went to the hospital. They drew blood for a tox screen. His next stop was at the Police station where he filed a complaint against the person or persons in the house. Then, using the Police Stations computer he called his credit card company and stopped all the purchases. The Police got the delivery address for the purchases from the companies as evidence. They arrested the woman, found the drugs that matched those in his blood system and she spent time in jail. And what type of idiot would have sex with a completely unknown woman and expose themselves to every disease known to man? And since she won't speak how does he know she won't have him arrested after he commits assault, battery and rape? Even in a fictional story you think he would go into the third door? It's like any horror movie. You NEVER open the door. You just get the hell out. This was just too far fetched to make for a good story. UGH!
No stars.
English
Stupidity runs amok.
What he really did? Was walked out of the house and went to the hospital. They drew blood for a tox screen. His next stop was at the Police station where he filed a complaint against the person or persons in the house. Then, using the Police Stations computer he called his credit card company and stopped all the purchases. The Police got the delivery address for the purchases from the companies as evidence. They arrested the woman, found the drugs that matched those in his blood system and she spent time in jail. And what type of idiot would have sex with a completely unknown woman and expose themselves to every disease known to man? And since she won't speak how does he know she won't have him arrested after he commits assault, battery and rape? Even in a fictional story you think he would go into the third door? It's like any horror movie. You NEVER open the door. You just get the hell out. This was just too far fetched to make for a good story. UGH!
No stars.
An enjoyable fantasy
Thank you for sharing it with us. Four stars and welcome, new author.
@Anonymous: Is there something you don't understand about the word 'fantasy'?
Nice job!
Hope to read more soon!. 5 *
Hey @Anonymous -
That was a very crappy story you wrote. Glad the author had better sense than you! 1/2 *
Great Story
Very good, nicely written, interesting fantasy, hope to read more of it soon.
PS
Ignore Anonymous. Obviously does NOT understand the purpose of stories here.
Hey anonymous idiot
If you don't like fictional stories then I'd hate to be the one to break it to you..... BUT YOU'RE IN THE WRONG PLACE!
Was a great story :)
I loved the tension! Hot as hell!
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