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The Dildo Designer's Apprentice Ch. 01

byMary_Mitternacht©
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by Anonymous01/13/15

Pretty Wild Imagination for the writer........

Great title..........

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by Anonymous01/14/15

Dildo Designer's Apprentice

Love the descriptions of the various teams pulling the various carts.

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by Anonymous01/14/15

Probability Zero

Most stories require a certain amount of suspension of disbelief. This one broke the 50 ton crane I uses to suspend disbelief. How frequently can they dismiss 90 women to recruit 10 sex slaves and not have anyone find out about it and stop their operation?

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by Mary_Mitternacht01/14/15

Er, was that last one trolling?

Who is this "anyone " who would "put a stop to it"? If you live under Shari'a, you have my sympathies, but there *are* places in the world where such things go on and nobody much cares what consenting adults get up to.

If you're making a fetish out of suspensions, I'm sorry, I can't help you there. But chapter 2 is pending approval and should be posted soon.

Kisses,
Mary

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by Anonymous01/15/15

unf this is good!!! Cant wait to see phase 2

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by Anonymous03/28/15

Cart pulling

Love the women pulling the carts as the doms arrive - please tell us more about them.

There are so much potential in that scene :)

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