How badly did he beat Mindy? Did she even make it to the hospital? Boy was this stupid. Nothing they did made sense. Why would he put himself in this position to be tortured by the bitch? Just plain awful writing and the dialogue must have been contributed by a ten year old.
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Anonymous01/14/15
Original!
Please ignore the commenter who alway leaves the same type of messages. Dude, stop reading femdom if it's not your thing! Great story, short n sweet. If like to see the next chapter!
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Anonymous01/25/15
And when anon commenter troll got a set of balls....
He'd just admit he secretly likes all these stories he keeps spending so much time reading and just allow himself to accept his conflicting thoughts... Please ignore the trolls! Great story, hoping for more. Thanks for the great story!
(And yeah, ignore the troll(s). I get them on my stories too and end up just deleting them. I love the thought that they're secretly jerking it but too embarrassed to admit it...LOL!)
I love how original it is. Sexy as hell to include the company operator. Please call the manager next, but don't let him cum till then! Btw lol to the annon who told the troll to grow some balls! These "and when he got loose" comments are everywhere in femdom stories. Just admit you like it dude, it's only a fantasy! Great writing, please continue
I loved the originality. I also appreciated that the domination was playful and painful, though not (particularly) demeaning to Luke. I look forward to the sequel with the company manager. Keep up the good work.
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When Luke got loose
How badly did he beat Mindy? Did she even make it to the hospital? Boy was this stupid. Nothing they did made sense. Why would he put himself in this position to be tortured by the bitch? Just plain awful writing and the dialogue must have been contributed by a ten year old.
Original!
Please ignore the commenter who alway leaves the same type of messages. Dude, stop reading femdom if it's not your thing! Great story, short n sweet. If like to see the next chapter!
And when anon commenter troll got a set of balls....
He'd just admit he secretly likes all these stories he keeps spending so much time reading and just allow himself to accept his conflicting thoughts... Please ignore the trolls! Great story, hoping for more. Thanks for the great story!
Original and hot! :D
(And yeah, ignore the troll(s). I get them on my stories too and end up just deleting them. I love the thought that they're secretly jerking it but too embarrassed to admit it...LOL!)
Great story!
I love how original it is. Sexy as hell to include the company operator. Please call the manager next, but don't let him cum till then! Btw lol to the annon who told the troll to grow some balls! These "and when he got loose" comments are everywhere in femdom stories. Just admit you like it dude, it's only a fantasy! Great writing, please continue
Great Story.
I loved the originality. I also appreciated that the domination was playful and painful, though not (particularly) demeaning to Luke. I look forward to the sequel with the company manager. Keep up the good work.
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