I found this to be extremely humorous. Only mildly sexy for an incest story, but very funny.
Made me laugh and smile. 5-star effort.
The commentator who complained about the spelling/editing errors totally missed the point of that humorous exchange where the daughter was talking with her mouth full and the words were coming out garbled.
I liked it and could actually visualize the conversation between father and daughter in the story. Mainly because I have actually known some ditzy, free-spirited women like Amber in RL.
although I do have a vague memory of a gnarled, giant penis - or was that supposed to be an alien?
This is a great story and highly amusing as a result of the wonderful dialogue. Not all writers read the dialogue aloud to check it works, but I'm certain you did.
Thanks to Dark_Star and many others of you for...Getting It. This is intended as a humor piece. As for Anonymous (how typical)...I may have many failings, but orthography and redaction are not two of them. My advice: stick to stories with lots of pictures. And maybe requiring crayons for your invaluable input.
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Anonymous01/15/15
Fantastic story!
Wow! This was great!
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Anonymous01/17/15
Great story
God damn, I enjoyed that. Great work. Though it feels wrong to ask for a sequel, I find myself wishing for more.
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Anonymous01/19/15
Sequel! Please!
One of the best stories Ive read in ages and only one page!? Encore!!! This story needs a follow up or two!
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Anonymous01/21/15
WONDERFUL
The dialogue was superb! Spelling errors? NONE. It was smart and witty and clever. KEEP WRITING! BRAVO!
To those who got it: thank you. I'm working on a sequel. Life is short, let's have some fun.
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Anonymous02/07/15
Office for rent.
I am thinking that the rent on the office space is about a hand job a day but to pay for the extra water bill it would be an extra blow job once a week unless she had a lot of patients then then water would probably be about 2 blow jobs a week.
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Anonymous02/09/15
Amazing!!!!!
Sexy and witty... Had a boner and a good laugh.
Loved it
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Anonymous02/12/15
Hurry!
Please hurry with your sequel! Would love to see this become a series, it's got a fantastic start!
Utter pish
title says it all; no stars.
Couldn't make it past all the spelling and editing errors
You really needed to proof read it and not just run it through a spell checker.
Unlike the previous commentators...
I found this to be extremely humorous. Only mildly sexy for an incest story, but very funny.
Made me laugh and smile. 5-star effort.
The commentator who complained about the spelling/editing errors totally missed the point of that humorous exchange where the daughter was talking with her mouth full and the words were coming out garbled.
Clever story. Enjoyed the read.
Fun read
This is the first fun and exciting incest story I have read
Amusing and fun
I liked it and could actually visualize the conversation between father and daughter in the story. Mainly because I have actually known some ditzy, free-spirited women like Amber in RL.
I don't recall any wanking in the film ...
although I do have a vague memory of a gnarled, giant penis - or was that supposed to be an alien?
This is a great story and highly amusing as a result of the wonderful dialogue. Not all writers read the dialogue aloud to check it works, but I'm certain you did.
A five star *****
Nut Job!
Daughter! It was cute maybe even funny but not much of a story.
Too Funny
That was funny and sexy, all at the same time. Thank you for making me laugh and get a chubby at the same time!
I'm Moving to California!
Great Story!
Humor
Thanks to Dark_Star and many others of you for...Getting It. This is intended as a humor piece. As for Anonymous (how typical)...I may have many failings, but orthography and redaction are not two of them. My advice: stick to stories with lots of pictures. And maybe requiring crayons for your invaluable input.
Fantastic story!
Wow! This was great!
Great story
God damn, I enjoyed that. Great work. Though it feels wrong to ask for a sequel, I find myself wishing for more.
Sequel! Please!
One of the best stories Ive read in ages and only one page!? Encore!!! This story needs a follow up or two!
WONDERFUL
The dialogue was superb! Spelling errors? NONE. It was smart and witty and clever. KEEP WRITING! BRAVO!
Thank you
To those who got it: thank you. I'm working on a sequel. Life is short, let's have some fun.
Office for rent.
I am thinking that the rent on the office space is about a hand job a day but to pay for the extra water bill it would be an extra blow job once a week unless she had a lot of patients then then water would probably be about 2 blow jobs a week.
Amazing!!!!!
Sexy and witty... Had a boner and a good laugh.
Loved it
Hurry!
Please hurry with your sequel! Would love to see this become a series, it's got a fantastic start!
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Yes, please continue with this story as a sequel ...
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