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Ejaculatory Therapy

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/14/15

Utter pish

title says it all; no stars.

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by Anonymous01/14/15

Couldn't make it past all the spelling and editing errors

You really needed to proof read it and not just run it through a spell checker.

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by Dark_Storm01/14/15

Unlike the previous commentators...

I found this to be extremely humorous. Only mildly sexy for an incest story, but very funny.

Made me laugh and smile. 5-star effort.

The commentator who complained about the spelling/editing errors totally missed the point of that humorous exchange where the daughter was talking with her mouth full and the words were coming out garbled.

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by thebuffalo01/14/15

Clever story. Enjoyed the read.

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by JohnCK01/14/15

Fun read

This is the first fun and exciting incest story I have read

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by darkdance6901/14/15

Amusing and fun

I liked it and could actually visualize the conversation between father and daughter in the story. Mainly because I have actually known some ditzy, free-spirited women like Amber in RL.

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by daddy195001/14/15

I don't recall any wanking in the film ...

although I do have a vague memory of a gnarled, giant penis - or was that supposed to be an alien?

This is a great story and highly amusing as a result of the wonderful dialogue. Not all writers read the dialogue aloud to check it works, but I'm certain you did.

A five star *****

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by Averygoodlay01/14/15

Nut Job!

Daughter! It was cute maybe even funny but not much of a story.

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by Brett78x01/14/15

Too Funny

That was funny and sexy, all at the same time. Thank you for making me laugh and get a chubby at the same time!

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by Anonymous01/15/15

I'm Moving to California!

Great Story!

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by rikkitampa201401/15/15

Humor

Thanks to Dark_Star and many others of you for...Getting It. This is intended as a humor piece. As for Anonymous (how typical)...I may have many failings, but orthography and redaction are not two of them. My advice: stick to stories with lots of pictures. And maybe requiring crayons for your invaluable input.

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by Anonymous01/15/15

Fantastic story!

Wow! This was great!

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by Anonymous01/17/15

Great story

God damn, I enjoyed that. Great work. Though it feels wrong to ask for a sequel, I find myself wishing for more.

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by Anonymous01/19/15

Sequel! Please!

One of the best stories Ive read in ages and only one page!? Encore!!! This story needs a follow up or two!

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by Anonymous01/21/15

WONDERFUL

The dialogue was superb! Spelling errors? NONE. It was smart and witty and clever. KEEP WRITING! BRAVO!

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by rikkitampa201401/24/15

Thank you

To those who got it: thank you. I'm working on a sequel. Life is short, let's have some fun.

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by Anonymous02/07/15

Office for rent.

I am thinking that the rent on the office space is about a hand job a day but to pay for the extra water bill it would be an extra blow job once a week unless she had a lot of patients then then water would probably be about 2 blow jobs a week.

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by Anonymous02/09/15

Amazing!!!!!

Sexy and witty... Had a boner and a good laugh.

Loved it

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by Anonymous02/12/15

Hurry!

Please hurry with your sequel! Would love to see this become a series, it's got a fantastic start!

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by mhmann03/20/15

MORE ... MORE ... MORE ...

Yes, please continue with this story as a sequel ...

MORE ... MORE ... MORE ...

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