by Spencerfiction
A thoroughly enjoyable story to read. Thank you for sharing.
It would have been nice to see this in the Loving Wives category, which needs more good stuff.
Good. Fine. Most of all, Well written. (just suspenseful enough, just enough humor to keep a smile on this reader's face, just....just a wonderful, happy tale.)
I agree with a previous post that it could have been in the Loving wife category. That category needs all the levity we can put in it. Lucky for me that I recognized your name beside the title or I would have skipped the story.
A bit convoluted in places but entertaining none the less. I would have liked to have read the scene where she clobbers him for being a supposed pervert and then the truth was revealed but one can't have everything. And I suspect in a court of law no Judge would rule against his seeing his daughter based upon hearsay evidence not supported by evidence. Good read. Thanks.
don't cry over the milk spill when the Trade is cloud-like, TK U MLJ LV NV
That first scene kept me hanging on to figure out wha' happened. Nice wind down.
Didn't think anything could great a laugh ouy of me tonight. You just did . Thanks
Thank you for the story. Had a great laugh at the end. Awesome. 5's.
But I enjoyed it nonetheless...
Very well put together even if I could have enjoyed much more of it. This could just as easily have been in Romance... Though interestingly enough, I feel like I need a long hot shower with lots of soap to get the sleaze of Stevens off of me... ewwww....
Thanks for the read...
without thought ...voted 5 stars .....
on the surface an engaging & interesting read
well written ,
just don't take away the rose tints or think too deeply on the tale
Excreted by a fag with diseased mind !!!
I would suggest possibly adding a scene wherein the lady realizes she has overreacted and injured an innocent man. The jump from being assaulted in his sleep to having a suite in the east wing is too large, adding in conversation to clear up the misunderstanding would establish their meeting and reveal their initial interest in each other.
Don't worry about Anonymous 10/10/15 comment. He is just another USA redneck from one of the interior hick states who usually reads comic books. He will be voting for Trumph as President! He obviously hates the Brits since they don't speak "American". He probably couldn't get past the sixth grade.
amusing and wish it was longer!
as my last girlfriend often said to me.
I enjoyed your little story very much. Thank you for sharing and am looking forward to more. As for anonymous 10/10/15-- he is an idiot.
Couldn't agree more about the Anon comments from 10/10/15, obviously a moron. However they are rivaled by the idiotic comments from Anon on 06/21/16 talk about prejudices!! Anyway back to the story, I thought that the basic storyline was excellent, however it ended too suddenly. Would like to of seen more of the relationships between the good Doctor and the "princess" as well as their daughters. Gave it a 4 but would of liked to give it a 5
It's nice to see an author with a good sense of humor. Didn't need any sex - just tongue in cheek. Thanks, 4*
What you want----you might get it !!!!! Trades can be a let down huh ?....
Rather short but fun to read, it has been said that "the best revenge is to live well".
This story shows this.
Thanks for sharing
That Brenda was a money scavenger and never loved the good doctor from the start. Would like to have seen that more developed.
....Always nice to see, but rarely happens. Here, it is easily devised via characteristic British understatement. 4 stars
and then you have to know the difference between wants and need. TK U MLJ LV NV
Such as I have never seen - ironic humor... what a surprise and a wonderful story, thanks
Wow, a real jem
The story has a moral and is fun
I return to read this a few times a year, it is worth it
Jason
It's a good story but I can't help feeling like a middle part is missing maybe just a few paragraphs of exposition. I still rated highly.
Grab the fire extinguisher and turn on the sprinklers, Brenda is as overcooked as a Thanksgiving turkey.
Who hit him with his medical bag knocking him out... and for what reason...