- All
Comments (22) - Add a
Comment - Send
Feedback Send private anonymous feedback to the author (click here to post a public comment instead).
| Literotica Toy Store ADULT TOY & DVD STORE FAST & DISCREET |
Literotica XXX Webcams 24/7 LIVE CAMS - FREE PREVIEW W/AUDIO! |
Literotica Adult Movies STREAMING ADULT MOVIES PAY PER MINUTE |
English
Thoroughly enjoyable...
A thoroughly enjoyable story to read. Thank you for sharing.
Good
It would have been nice to see this in the Loving Wives category, which needs more good stuff.
Nice.
Good. Fine. Most of all, Well written. (just suspenseful enough, just enough humor to keep a smile on this reader's face, just....just a wonderful, happy tale.)
Lovely story
I agree with a previous post that it could have been in the Loving wife category. That category needs all the levity we can put in it. Lucky for me that I recognized your name beside the title or I would have skipped the story.
nice.
Karma: they each got what they deserved.
Pretty good story
A bit convoluted in places but entertaining none the less. I would have liked to have read the scene where she clobbers him for being a supposed pervert and then the truth was revealed but one can't have everything. And I suspect in a court of law no Judge would rule against his seeing his daughter based upon hearsay evidence not supported by evidence. Good read. Thanks.
Nice
fantasy fluff. LW aficionados would love it.
WHEN YOU CHOOSE WRONG ON YOUR TRADE-UP
don't cry over the milk spill when the Trade is cloud-like, TK U MLJ LV NV
Lovely Fantasy
That first scene kept me hanging on to figure out wha' happened. Nice wind down.
Great job
Didn't think anything could great a laugh ouy of me tonight. You just did . Thanks
Hah
Just what I needed. A great big laugh tonight. Way to go, Ian.
Fun Read!!
Thank you for the story. Had a great laugh at the end. Awesome. 5's.
What a spectacularly Disney-esque story...
But I enjoyed it nonetheless...
Very well put together even if I could have enjoyed much more of it. This could just as easily have been in Romance... Though interestingly enough, I feel like I need a long hot shower with lots of soap to get the sleaze of Stevens off of me... ewwww....
Thanks for the read...
Fun Read***
Thanks for sharing this very enjoyable read.
jolly
without thought ...voted 5 stars .....
on the surface an engaging & interesting read
well written ,
just don't take away the rose tints or think too deeply on the tale
The most pathetic drivel of all times !! 1* !!!
Excreted by a fag with diseased mind !!!
Happy
Thanks it gave me a nice emotion.******
Nice job!
I would suggest possibly adding a scene wherein the lady realizes she has overreacted and injured an innocent man. The jump from being assaulted in his sleep to having a suite in the east wing is too large, adding in conversation to clear up the misunderstanding would establish their meeting and reveal their initial interest in each other.
Excellent Story
Don't worry about Anonymous 10/10/15 comment. He is just another USA redneck from one of the interior hick states who usually reads comic books. He will be voting for Trumph as President! He obviously hates the Brits since they don't speak "American". He probably couldn't get past the sixth grade.
great 5*
amusing and wish it was longer!
as my last girlfriend often said to me.
Thank You
I enjoyed your little story very much. Thank you for sharing and am looking forward to more. As for anonymous 10/10/15-- he is an idiot.
Good story
Couldn't agree more about the Anon comments from 10/10/15, obviously a moron. However they are rivaled by the idiotic comments from Anon on 06/21/16 talk about prejudices!! Anyway back to the story, I thought that the basic storyline was excellent, however it ended too suddenly. Would like to of seen more of the relationships between the good Doctor and the "princess" as well as their daughters. Gave it a 4 but would of liked to give it a 5
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Trading Up or
More submissions by Spencerfiction.