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This wasn't a chapter
It was a memo. Why bother?
Short chapters
In another chapter I asked if people would rather I submit shorter chapters more frequently or wait longer, and the only feedback I got was shorter more frequently. Sorry it was too short for you =/. I'll try to work on making sure they're longer in the future.
omg
Don't bother with an anon comment like that you have loyal readers that love this tale. How about short or long length, frequency often or when can, doesn't matter any where's near as important as the writing and intense growth of character development. Keep doing what you have been doing. You story is amazing and so welcomed compared to others that are offered here. Thank you
This is such a good story!
I love this story, Litmoir! I do wish your chapters were longer, but I also get that real life has a way of rearing its head every once a while, and writing such an intense story can take a lot out of you.
I'm always delighted when new chapters are posted!
stay true!
I agree with getthebook! You're doing very well with this story- don't feel like you have to rush or force things to please other people. You're never going to please everybody all the time- being contentious is human nature. Write what you want, how you want it, and don't worry too much about nitpicky receptions when you post. Some people are just never satisfied. Notice anon. didn't have anything to say about the plot, characters, story pacing, or any of the actual work itself- just that there wasn't enough of it. To that I say- you want quantity, go buy a book! Keep your chin up, litmoir, and keep up the good work (in your own time)!
Good Work
I have enjoyed your story so far and hope that you will bring it to a proper conclusion, unlike several other submissions that are incomplete
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