This story wasn't rated hot on the Literotica scale, but I found it quite stimulating. It isn't super-hot, but definitely hot, and it left me with a swelling that'll take a while to go down - unless I take things in hand.
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Anonymous06/02/08
good but
good but could have been better if you had continued the story and let us know how things go for them in the next few years
This is the kind of story that just does it for me. I'm all for good sex, happy pepole,and happy endings. As far as I;m concerned,you do not need forced sex, violance, or any of the other shit that is in alot of the stories on this sight.
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Anonymous05/16/12
Good story.
I did enjoy it. But the way her brother was mentioned... 3 years away, age 20, Len....gave it away. A polite suggestion....there is mystery when masked, her brother's info should have been revealed after the copulation, and before recognizing each other.
This was kind of a quiet story. In spite of her interests, it lacked an intensity. Did seem that the mystery could have been extended somewhat. As one of the other commented, you gave away too much in the beginning. I will be reading some of your other work though
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Anonymous09/18/14
Great story
Loved it but it was to short. You could have extended by two or three more chapter easily and made it into a truly great story....5 stars anyway....
English
Hot! Hot! Hot!
This story wasn't rated hot on the Literotica scale, but I found it quite stimulating. It isn't super-hot, but definitely hot, and it left me with a swelling that'll take a while to go down - unless I take things in hand.
good but
good but could have been better if you had continued the story and let us know how things go for them in the next few years
Great story
This is the kind of story that just does it for me. I'm all for good sex, happy pepole,and happy endings. As far as I;m concerned,you do not need forced sex, violance, or any of the other shit that is in alot of the stories on this sight.
Good story.
I did enjoy it. But the way her brother was mentioned... 3 years away, age 20, Len....gave it away. A polite suggestion....there is mystery when masked, her brother's info should have been revealed after the copulation, and before recognizing each other.
Thanks Don
Good Story
This was kind of a quiet story. In spite of her interests, it lacked an intensity. Did seem that the mystery could have been extended somewhat. As one of the other commented, you gave away too much in the beginning. I will be reading some of your other work though
Great story
Loved it but it was to short. You could have extended by two or three more chapter easily and made it into a truly great story....5 stars anyway....
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