I love everything so far and I think my bias in this story would be Erik (love green eyes and he sounds like a badass metrosexual guy which is totally my type, ^^)
Oh, and this is actually the first time I can relate so well to the main female character, I interact with people the exact same way. Fake confidence and interest with older people and authoritarians and extreme anxiousness with male hotties. I'm so looking forward to the next chapter!
I am sure she really needs to go home but I think she doesn't want to go home. When she goes home maybe she will not be missed. That will make her not want to be home. I love all the details. Keep it up.
The only part I dont like is where it says is a 2 part series and this is already the 2nd part!
I want MORE and am completely delighted with the rythm and style of the story, I want to see more of what happens, I want see if Freya decides to stay longer and -do- more with them or even just one.
Very interesting, indeed. Its almost as if im in the twilight zone... myself & the heroin are so...alike. The only downside to this is there is no MORE; why do ypu do this to me? :( Also, something i thought peculiar about Everett is that he is so big and manly but has...white hair. Unusual. But that is why i like it ;)
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Anonymous01/18/15
It's Great!
I thoroughly enjoyed what you have posted so far. I am anxiously awaiting more!
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Anonymous01/20/15
love it!!!
I am really enjoying your story.
I hope you will continue it. I cannot wait to see what happens!
Sorry I didn't comment on ch.1 but I was keen to get to the next chapter and I'm glad I did. You have written a very intriguing story. I'm excited to get to the next lot of chapters. Don't stop writing. :-D
English
Swirling
Thoughts and feelings.
Great story. Still have no idea how what next is happening. So many paths to choose from, and those are just the ones I can think of.
Cats are wicked, aren't they?
Great story!
I love everything so far and I think my bias in this story would be Erik (love green eyes and he sounds like a badass metrosexual guy which is totally my type, ^^)
Oh, and this is actually the first time I can relate so well to the main female character, I interact with people the exact same way. Fake confidence and interest with older people and authoritarians and extreme anxiousness with male hotties. I'm so looking forward to the next chapter!
Fantastic, more please!!!!!
I am sure she really needs to go home but I think she doesn't want to go home. When she goes home maybe she will not be missed. That will make her not want to be home. I love all the details. Keep it up.
Wonderful!
The only part I dont like is where it says is a 2 part series and this is already the 2nd part!
I want MORE and am completely delighted with the rythm and style of the story, I want to see more of what happens, I want see if Freya decides to stay longer and -do- more with them or even just one.
On Point.
Very interesting, indeed. Its almost as if im in the twilight zone... myself & the heroin are so...alike. The only downside to this is there is no MORE; why do ypu do this to me? :( Also, something i thought peculiar about Everett is that he is so big and manly but has...white hair. Unusual. But that is why i like it ;)
It's Great!
I thoroughly enjoyed what you have posted so far. I am anxiously awaiting more!
love it!!!
I am really enjoying your story.
I hope you will continue it. I cannot wait to see what happens!
more please
Very enjoyable read. Has me waiting for more!!
Loving it!
Sorry I didn't comment on ch.1 but I was keen to get to the next chapter and I'm glad I did. You have written a very intriguing story. I'm excited to get to the next lot of chapters. Don't stop writing. :-D
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