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OK I'm Confused?????
Is this back story or a continuation from the first part?
Although this is well written grammatically, it appears to all over the place.
There is no mention of his wife or the transformation he went through in chapter one.
Also in chapter one there is no mention of his children.
I agree with first commenter. What did this have to do with part one? It's not a sequel and it sucked to boot. It was just a gay dalliance
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I'm not getting this. Doesn't appear to be a true second part to the first story of this name. Is it supposed to be, or is it completely different?
i agree with the previous posters
what did I just read?
i dont care if it is part 1 or part 2 or even if it follows on from anything ,i enjoyed it and i would love it if you develope it further , i would love to hear more of your submission .x
Is this the character from ch1?
Because it doesn't follow.
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