When I first wrote it, she wanted me to put step brothers. However, both of her parents are ndeceased, so she said write it like it really happened, which was with her actual brothers.
Prop69. Sounds to me like you are a racist bigot. Is there something wrong with a woman sleeping with a black man? Sounds to me like you are fairly narrow minded. Sucks to be you, huh?
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Didn't affect the telling of the story ... still quite hot.
But, in one place you referred to her brothers as 'step-brothers' - when, earlier in the story, you made it pretty clear they were not step-brothers.
Like I said - not a big deal for me - I liked the story - just thought you'd like to know.
Brother or step brother
When I first wrote it, she wanted me to put step brothers. However, both of her parents are ndeceased, so she said write it like it really happened, which was with her actual brothers.
Prop69-racist?
Prop69. Sounds to me like you are a racist bigot. Is there something wrong with a woman sleeping with a black man? Sounds to me like you are fairly narrow minded. Sucks to be you, huh?
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