An excellent and endearing story. Hot, too!
You know, AMB, you are to erotica, what...Mozart is to...erotica.
Such a searingly hot story. The tension was palpable, the payoff extremely satisfying. I wish just one of my guitar lessons had gone like that.
This is almost always an enjoyable site, but it's still almost surprising to come across a story with actual characters a plot-line and writing from the 'lit' end of the literotica spectrum. Good stuff! - Thanks.
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Certainly hope there will be more
An excellent and endearing story. Hot, too!
You know, AMB, you are to erotica, what...Mozart is to...erotica.
And what as sweet song it is
Such a searingly hot story. The tension was palpable, the payoff extremely satisfying. I wish just one of my guitar lessons had gone like that.
Good stuff
This is almost always an enjoyable site, but it's still almost surprising to come across a story with
actual characters
a plot-line
and writing from the 'lit' end of the literotica spectrum.
Good stuff! - Thanks.
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Back to A New Song or
More submissions by AMoveableBeast.