"Pussy mussels" does not bring the sexiest image to mind.
Yes, an editor might help a little. But the little scene you just described was just fine with the 'pussy mussels' as the wording seems to catch the moment of frantic sexual activity. You have some interesting adventures, so please keep writing
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! orBack to Pushing My Boundaries Ch. 02 orMore submissions by Kissytina.
[...]
Edit comment orSubmit Comment
Posting...
Comment posted successfully - click here to view it or write another.
Title of your comment:
Your public comment about Pushing My Boundaries Ch. 02:
Preview comment
Username:
Password:Forgot your password?
Security code:
Your current user avatar, all sizes:
You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.
Select new user avatar:
Upload and save Cancel
User avatar uploaded successfuly and waiting for moderation.
Close
English
"Pussy mussels" does not bring the sexiest image to mind.
5 stars again
Yes, an editor might help a little. But the little scene you just described was just fine with the 'pussy mussels' as the wording seems to catch the moment of frantic sexual activity. You have some interesting adventures, so please keep writing
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Pushing My Boundaries Ch. 02 or
More submissions by Kissytina.