Generica - Cheating Wife

Kinda funny!

Hilarious

I was kind of curious when I read your name as the author and even more curious as I started the tale. Then everything became crystal clear and I laughed my ass off. Great tale.

Five Stars

The SPOONS!

The spoon caused my LOL! Thanks!

About sums the whole Lv section up.

Hardly seems worth trying to write any more stories now, as this one just about covers it all. Loved the comment about going bankrupt because of the spoons by the way! Definitely 5 stars. I would have given you six, but you missed out our hero winning millions on the lottery.

Where's the car?

The only missing piece is the hero driving toward sunset in his Ford Lexus. 5*

Thanks

Finally. A realistic story in Literotica!

That was funnier than all hell

LOL

Well I think you touched on everything.

A funny synopsis of the LW section. I could think of a few you missed but what would be the point?

Hope you will be able to talk soon

Since your tongue has to be still firmly planted in your cheek. I congratulate you on being able to hit so many of the informal conventions of LW category. Some of which I hate with incredible passion although I gave of my life to read them before I found them to be faithless in their passion.

Hilarious!

i know there must be something in the BTB catalog that you missed--but I can't think what.

Excellent

That was super funny, an excellent rip on soooooo many of those loving wife stories. Well done!

Feel better now?

Man...there have been so many times I've been tempted to write a story like this. But no need now. You hit every cliche there is, and knocked it out of the park.

Very well done.

"Wooden spoon." LOL!

har har

When I read her name was Generica, I knew something was up. har har

i know you felt compelled to write it

I just wish I hadn't read it.

Wow!

That was wild and hilarious. Thanks!

Every chcile know to Lit all wrapped into one story...

Funny,

You don't take any chances,

Good thing you put it under humor and satire. Under LW, you would have gotten nasty comments on the characters.
Hilarious!

I gave it four stars...

... This was my first read and comment in this category. Panther fan.

Juvinile

If this was supposed to humor it didn't work.

Well Played.

exceedingly well done ,

salute .

the only thing missing was Generica's
12" forked tongue in Rastus ass Cheek.

xxxhugsxxxsmilesxxxlaughterxxxx

Very well done !

Could have been a but better in the end it seemed like you kind of rushed it but I love the underdog going Rambo angle absolutely wonderful !

Loved it

Very funny!

What?

If this is your shot at humor....you missed.....by a lot

Too realistic perhaps....

I wonder whether for some readers this had too much of the element of truth to be funny.

Bedtime story

This is a bedtime story told by men who have been cheated on to their sons. I know, something like it was told to me when I was a kid. It was a very nasty divorce. Turned out that they both cheated and neither one were my biological parents!! LOL I'm adopted. I don't have anything to do with either of them anymore.

keep it real...

May be a good story but, 16" to 25" dicks, I stopped reading at that bull shit line. Why not 8' to 10' dicks. Or are you talking about a bunch of black horses? v

unbelievable

What an unbelievable story of how a loving wife got ruined. The story line was well thought out and captured the vernacular of both the protagonist and his magnificently well endowed adversaries. Thank you so much for sharing this original and well thought out piece of fiction. Bravo and kudos for such an unbelievable masterpiece. .

The category says it all, lmhwao.

All you complainers of how unrealistic and unlikely this is need to go back and look at the category this was published under. HUMOR AND SATIRE. The whole idea was to make it unrealistic and humorous. Sheesh, some people just don't have a sense of humor.

AN ADULT DICK AND JANE

with the Little Rascals thrown in. TK U MLJ LV NV

stupid little anons

Only stupid people can't see this is in the satire section
Get a grip , its not meant to be realistic

Which language?

Where did you do your schooling? You call this English?

Couching racism in "humor" doesn't make it acceptable... the shame is that you people don't even see the racism in yourselves.... you make excuses and attempt to deflect the blame towards those you target... and you actually think you are "decent"

To the previous anon commenter...

Can you spell S-A-T-I-R-E? Just askin'

Oh boy! What a stupid story..."...BDSM slave of a Nazi war criminal living in Bolivia?" Man, go with a shrink if you have unsolved issues with women (what is more than apparent from your story); Don't air your hate here! Please?

The language is ebonics

And that's what niggers speak.you can send them to school for 12years and they still read like a7 year old,if they can play ball (they're allowed to go to college 4more years even though they're illiterate)in the end Ebonics be all they have.Rastus, you gotta love it.

beautiful!!

It was funny.

need enhansment

first of all I would to be excused for my bad English as I am not an English speaker
second , I think that there are a lot of mistakes in that story , you said at the beginning that she is not a cheating wife and raised as restricted person , so it will never happen to change her life style in a minute , and start to have a gang bang within a few seconds only because she was drugged
I think that you needed to show the transfer from a good wife to a cheating wife gradually,
and the end of the story is very poor, you just choose the easy way to solve the problem by making her husbend a superman who has a lot of contacts, because if he has those contact then she would know that and not try to challenge him like that
It was better that he destroy her life by getting all of them arrested foe drug dealing and destroy jer reputation using this video tape

IT'S A SATIRE DUMBASS!!

By all the names of God, some of the commenters show how dumb they really are; The woman is called Generica Whitebread FFS. This is what people with an IQ of more than 90 call a clue!
The author is quite cleverly taking the piss out of the usual tropes used in interracial porn.
I despair of the continuing failure in the current education systems around the world, if these are the best responses to an obviously satirical work.

Terrible

Sorry but this has to be the worst story I've read on this site. It's good that you don't have to rely on your writing skills to earn money, you would certainly starve to death. It's so bad that I think you wrote it as a joke .. not even worth rating because there's no zero

Reading too many LW stories...

Loved this satire of a satire of a LW story. I'm assuming that since the "satirical" content was so over-the-top (not a hint of subtlety here!) that this was intended as such...

Whores

Geneica should have walked out as soon as she see what her friend was up to, or did she know already?
I liked what happened to the bullies best part.