Generica - Cheating Wife

Kinda funny!

Hilarious

I was kind of curious when I read your name as the author and even more curious as I started the tale. Then everything became crystal clear and I laughed my ass off. Great tale.

Five Stars

The SPOONS!

The spoon caused my LOL! Thanks!

About sums the whole Lv section up.

Hardly seems worth trying to write any more stories now, as this one just about covers it all. Loved the comment about going bankrupt because of the spoons by the way! Definitely 5 stars. I would have given you six, but you missed out our hero winning millions on the lottery.

Where's the car?

The only missing piece is the hero driving toward sunset in his Ford Lexus. 5*

Thanks

Finally. A realistic story in Literotica!

That was funnier than all hell

LOL

Well I think you touched on everything.

A funny synopsis of the LW section. I could think of a few you missed but what would be the point?

Hope you will be able to talk soon

Since your tongue has to be still firmly planted in your cheek. I congratulate you on being able to hit so many of the informal conventions of LW category. Some of which I hate with incredible passion although I gave of my life to read them before I found them to be faithless in their passion.

Hilarious!

i know there must be something in the BTB catalog that you missed--but I can't think what.

Excellent

That was super funny, an excellent rip on soooooo many of those loving wife stories. Well done!

Feel better now?

Man...there have been so many times I've been tempted to write a story like this. But no need now. You hit every cliche there is, and knocked it out of the park.

Very well done.

"Wooden spoon." LOL!

har har

When I read her name was Generica, I knew something was up. har har

i know you felt compelled to write it

I just wish I hadn't read it.

Wow!

That was wild and hilarious. Thanks!

Every chcile know to Lit all wrapped into one story...

Funny,

You don't take any chances,

Good thing you put it under humor and satire. Under LW, you would have gotten nasty comments on the characters.
Hilarious!

I gave it four stars...

... This was my first read and comment in this category. Panther fan.

Juvinile

If this was supposed to humor it didn't work.

Well Played.

exceedingly well done ,

salute .

the only thing missing was Generica's
12" forked tongue in Rastus ass Cheek.

xxxhugsxxxsmilesxxxlaughterxxxx

Very well done !

Could have been a but better in the end it seemed like you kind of rushed it but I love the underdog going Rambo angle absolutely wonderful !

Loved it

Very funny!

What?

If this is your shot at humor....you missed.....by a lot

Too realistic perhaps....

I wonder whether for some readers this had too much of the element of truth to be funny.