I'll Do Anything, Sir

Great Story.

Very hot, i hope she's pregnant.

It started well

The build-up was brilliant. her fear and reluctance to admit what was coming when he came back from court, likewise.

Her sudden capitulation and orgasm spoiled it for me. She should have taken much longer than two paragraphs. I didn't vote.

BRILLIANT!

Please write a sequel! Actually, an entire series would be better! ;)

I, too, would like to see a whole series!

Great start

You captured her myriad of emotions well , actually just a suggestion a series on them would be great . It was good and would be nice to flesh them out into a relationship.

good until the magic dick happened

The story was good until the end where suddenly she's agreeing with him and happy just because he gave her an orgasm