by SecretSecretary
The build-up was brilliant. her fear and reluctance to admit what was coming when he came back from court, likewise.
Her sudden capitulation and orgasm spoiled it for me. She should have taken much longer than two paragraphs. I didn't vote.
You captured her myriad of emotions well , actually just a suggestion a series on them would be great . It was good and would be nice to flesh them out into a relationship.
The story was good until the end where suddenly she's agreeing with him and happy just because he gave her an orgasm
It is clearly marked "Non-Consensual". If you don't like stories with rape, I suggest you avoid stories in that category.
There are many who seem not to understand the difference between bdsm non-consent and rape - this is simply rape - nothing good ever comes from it. The author could have easily turned the scene into a reluctance non-consent submission